这是一个中国gg写的英语情书，好小伙啊，从他看见了偶当年的影子，可惜英文实在不咋的

Everyone wants to find an ideal girl in one’s heart, I do too.Everyone has own standard of an ideal girl.My roommate says the girl must be beautiful.This was the most ordinary word that I heard. I thought that this word reflected the man wasn’t mature yet.We couldn’t judge people only by appearance.More important was her soul.I remember a word that interior beauty is just really beautiful,isn’t it ?Fortunately,I come upon a girl like that.

She looks very simple and natural. She has a big pair of eyes and long black hair.She is sincere and friendly with others. Everyone she knowed thinks she is a wonderful girl.When I chat with her,I have a special feeling that make me feel quiet and dependable.She ofen appears in my mind. As I see the lovers walking hand in hand in the campus,I will fall into bad mood.But I can’t tell her about this,not because I don’t love her,but because I may be difficult to bring happiness to her in the future. What I shall do! Now I am very confused.

How far is the ideal away from reality? I ofen ask myself. Nowadays,more and more people think that love must be based on the money. Although I couldn’t accept this view,I have no way to avoid such a question,after all I don’t live in vacuum. She and I have different social background.I come from the country,I clearly realize that if I want to succed, I would pay more effort than the others under the same circumstance. I know there is a zigzag way in fornt of me to go.I am not willing to see my sweetheart suffering with me,for I am a man.Maybe someone will say that I lack courage and I am a coward. It’s just that they don’t know what the true love is .I always think that loving someone doesn’t lie in deriving her but hoping her happiness,at least I think so. However, I will remember I ever loving a girl like that.


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Deep in any man’s heart beats the desire to find the ideal girl.
How does one define the ideal girl? Beauty is superficial whilst the soul is fathomless. Attraction for beauty’s sake alone is an empty path that can lead only to disappointment; what lies within is the true test of attraction.
I am blessed because I believe that I have found just such a girl.

Her sincere wide eyes reflect the joy of friendship and a flick of her long black hair captivates all around. When I talk to her I feel an inner peace and a sense of trust: a feeling that lingers long after we have parted.
Watching lovers stroll around campus hand in hand tugs at my heartstrings. How can I tell her that I can fill her life with happiness whilst I am unsure that I could fulfil such a promise? Why are financial considerations so important and why, where love is concerned, should the difference in our social backgrounds carry any weight?
I know I can overcome these issues because I love her. My efforts to make her happy for every day of her life would know no bounds.

The path ahead is not easy for me; my lack of self confidence in these matters troubles me deeply. Am I a coward? Emphatically no, her happiness is my only goal and the very fact that I consider these issues reflects my deep and endless affection for the girl of my dreams. Loving someone is about giving not taking. Whatever happens in the future, as long as I live I will never forget her.

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-7-30 2:17:55编辑过]