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回复 [url=http://forums.huaren.us/showtopic.aspx?topicid=1222855&postid=47679336#47679336]1楼cute-wheat的帖子[/url]
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Thank you, cute-wheat! Just purchased a full size Revive system through your link! :-) :-) Thank Startover2016 for sharing the promotion code! It still works! :-)
Cute-wheat, admire your courage and strength. Thank you for sharing the insights on dating and love life! My silly PC could not type Chinese. Have to put up with my poor English then. I will follow your guide to start over in 2016 too! :-))
最近还有mm提供书单吗?
最近还有mm提供书单吗?
谢谢lz分享
楼主好棒,喜欢这样聪慧,拎得清的姑娘,关键还很善良和大家分享这些。我是全部看完才来发表的,一个帖子可以坚持这么久,真的不容易。我和楼主年龄差不多,但情商什么的真是有待继续提高。我是今年刚从另一个地方搬到湾区,刚开始约会了几个月后心态不太好的时候看到cute的帖子,帮到我很多,最关键的是现在心态好多了,谢谢你!祝一切顺利!
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写作简洁的确很重要, mm们不介意的话分享一篇几个podcast都有推荐的文章。
The Day You Became A Better Writer
by Scot Adams
I went from being a bad writer to a good writer after taking a one-day course in “business writing.” I couldn’t believe how simple it was. I’ll tell you the main tricks here so you don’t have to waste a day in class.
Business writing is about clarity and persuasion. The main technique is keeping things simple. Simple writing is persuasive. A good argument in five sentences will sway more people than a brilliant argument in a hundred sentences. Don’t fight it.
Simple means getting rid of extra words. Don’t write, “He was very happy” when you can write “He was happy.” You think the word “very” adds something. It doesn’t. Prune your sentences.
Humor writing is a lot like business writing. It needs to be simple. The main difference is in the choice of words. For humor, don’t say “drink” when you can say “swill.”
Your first sentence needs to grab the reader. Go back and read my first sentence to this post. I rewrote it a dozen times. It makes you curious. That’s the key.
Write short sentences. Avoid putting multiple thoughts in one sentence. Readers aren’t as smart as you’d think.
Learn how brains organize ideas. Readers comprehend “the boy hit the ball” quicker than “the ball was hit by the boy.” Both sentences mean the same, but it’s easier to imagine the object (the boy) before the action (the hitting). All brains work that way. (Notice I didn’t say, “That is the way all brains work”?)
That’s it. You just learned 80% of the rules of good writing. You’re welcome.
sai 发表于 4/9/2016 6:58:19 PM [url=http://forums.huaren.us/showtopic.aspx?topicid=1222855&postid=71356012#71356012][/url]
The Day You Became A Better Writer
by Scot Adams
I went from being a bad writer to a good writer after taking a one-day course in “business writing.” I couldn’t believe how simple it was. I’ll tell you the main tricks here so you don’t have to waste a day in class.
Business writing is about clarity and persuasion. The main technique is keeping things simple. Simple writing is persuasive. A good argument in five sentences will sway more people than a brilliant argument in a hundred sentences. Don’t fight it.
Simple means getting rid of extra words. Don’t write, “He was very happy” when you can write “He was happy.” You think the word “very” adds something. It doesn’t. Prune your sentences.
Humor writing is a lot like business writing. It needs to be simple. The main difference is in the choice of words. For humor, don’t say “drink” when you can say “swill.”
Your first sentence needs to grab the reader. Go back and read my first sentence to this post. I rewrote it a dozen times. It makes you curious. That’s the key.
Write short sentences. Avoid putting multiple thoughts in one sentence. Readers aren’t as smart as you’d think.
Learn how brains organize ideas. Readers comprehend “the boy hit the ball” quicker than “the ball was hit by the boy.” Both sentences mean the same, but it’s easier to imagine the object (the boy) before the action (the hitting). All brains work that way. (Notice I didn’t say, “That is the way all brains work”?)
That’s it. You just learned 80% of the rules of good writing. You’re welcome.
sai 发表于 4/9/2016 6:58:19 PM [url=http://forums.huaren.us/showtopic.aspx?topicid=1222855&postid=71356012#71356012][/url]
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