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Huaren
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2010-12-06 21:58:00

以下是引用zozojohn在12/6/2010 7:02:00 PM的发言:

你已经够美了!!!

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coucou

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2010-12-06 21:58:00

bless Qiuqiu and Laotai!
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2010-12-06 22:06:00

以下是引用rainysunny在12/6/2010 9:26:00 PM的发言:

hi,D妈. 没有呢. 哈哈.


 


hehe,这么兴奋,估计快乐!

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annok828

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2010-12-06 22:17:00

谁给改改?


 


迪周末要参加一个英语演讲比赛,是我要求他去锻炼锻炼的,按照他的本性,自然是不肯抛头露面的。


比赛主题winter,随便写啥都可以,不超过4分钟/人,下不舍底,知道这个消息他很高兴,于是写了篇简单的“诗”,这样需要背的东西少!


 


大家看看怎么给改改:


 


 


Winter


Grandma told me


Winter is too cold.


I couldn't bear it.


 


I think so!


So I wished:


Winter, Go Away!


I don't like you!


The magician of Winter heard what I said and ran away.


 


The second day,


When I woke up,


I found there is no winter.


I was very happy about it.


 


"It is spring! It is spring!"


I shouted.


 


Several days later,


The TV News said,


There are many bad bugs these days.


Most of the crops were eaten by them.


 


And two weeks later,


My grandma said,


These days mosquitors were too much and too big,


"That scare me!The warm weather is not always good"


 


And a month later,


You know it is December now.


The teacher told us,


We have no WINTER, so we have NO CHRISTMAS!!!


OH,NO!


Winter please come back!


Christmas please come back!


 


The magician of Winter heard me and very pleased to come back


So you see,


We have Winter again!!!


 

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joyce1213

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2010-12-07 00:08:00

Happy birthday


豆美女,天帅哥


muah muah咬两口

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2010-12-07 00:11:00

以下是引用qiqi-2008在12/6/2010 8:52:00 PM的发言:


现在基本上白天上上网,做做饭。 琪琪爸今天和明天在家里上班,负责接送琪琪。星期三开始琪琪爸就正常上班了。 我恢复得不错,没啥感觉了。 伤口很小,共3个,一个1.5厘米,一个1厘米,还有一个在肚脐眼几乎看不到。

好好休息,照顾好自己很重要

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2010-12-07 00:12:00

 D ma, I think the poem is wonderfully written. seriously, i am impressed.

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joyce1213

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2010-12-07 00:13:00

D太太太棒了,我这个水平只有看的份,没有改的份
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joyce1213

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2010-12-07 00:16:00

爬完了


坤同学才回来上了一个星期的daycare又开始生病了,周5晚上开始发低烧,流鼻涕,咳嗽还有痰,不过小家伙不会吐出来。每次看他咳就心疼。胃口也不好,今天晚饭基本没有吃。半夜还老醒,刚train了两天,现在生病了,后妈也不忍心了。

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2010-12-07 00:45:00

以下是引用qiqi-2008在12/6/2010 9:09:00 PM的发言:

谢谢迪妈,没事了,就是上次说的那个卵巢囊肿,总也不消失,所以动手术拿掉了。

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