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Huaren
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(干货都没了)从online dating说到bloody gorgeous Harvey!

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2014-03-05 13:17:11

回复 [url=http://forums.huaren.us/showtopic.aspx?topicid=1222855&postid=62009694#62009694]5176楼cute-wheat的帖子[/url] 非常期待小麦mm的update~~ 很想知道更多kevin spacey 的 inside scoop,联想到了entourage,不知道有没有同好,show里的故事真实性不晓得如何,但是演员、agent、制片公司之间的dynamics倒是比较少有其他片子拍,非常interesting。 mm赶紧写啊,越早写记得越多~~多谢分享~~
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2016-04-09 18:58:19

写作简洁的确很重要, mm们不介意的话分享一篇几个podcast都有推荐的文章。 The Day You Became A Better Writer by Scot Adams I went from being a bad writer to a good writer after taking a one-day course in “business writing.” I couldn’t believe how simple it was. I’ll tell you the main tricks here so you don’t have to waste a day in class. Business writing is about clarity and persuasion. The main technique is keeping things simple. Simple writing is persuasive. A good argument in five sentences will sway more people than a brilliant argument in a hundred sentences. Don’t fight it. Simple means getting rid of extra words. Don’t write, “He was very happy” when you can write “He was happy.” You think the word “very” adds something. It doesn’t. Prune your sentences. Humor writing is a lot like business writing. It needs to be simple. The main difference is in the choice of words. For humor, don’t say “drink” when you can say “swill.” Your first sentence needs to grab the reader. Go back and read my first sentence to this post. I rewrote it a dozen times. It makes you curious. That’s the key. Write short sentences. Avoid putting multiple thoughts in one sentence. Readers aren’t as smart as you’d think. Learn how brains organize ideas. Readers comprehend “the boy hit the ball” quicker than “the ball was hit by the boy.” Both sentences mean the same, but it’s easier to imagine the object (the boy) before the action (the hitting). All brains work that way. (Notice I didn’t say, “That is the way all brains work”?) That’s it. You just learned 80% of the rules of good writing. You’re welcome.
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