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2016-06-11 18:15:47

写作简洁的确很重要, mm们不介意的话分享一篇几个podcast都有推荐的文章。

The Day You Became A Better Writer

by Scot Adams

I went from being a bad writer to a good writer after taking a one-day course in “business writing.” I couldn’t believe how simple it was. I’ll tell you the main tricks here so you don’t have to waste a day in class.

Business writing is about clarity and persuasion. The main technique is keeping things simple. Simple writing is persuasive. A good argument in five sentences will sway more people than a brilliant argument in a hundred sentences. Don’t fight it.

Simple means getting rid of extra words. Don’t write, “He was very happy” when you can write “He was happy.” You think the word “very” adds something. It doesn’t. Prune your sentences.

Humor writing is a lot like business writing. It needs to be simple. The main difference is in the choice of words. For humor, don’t say “drink” when you can say “swill.”

Your first sentence needs to grab the reader. Go back and read my first sentence to this post. I rewrote it a dozen times. It makes you curious. That’s the key.

Write short sentences. Avoid putting multiple thoughts in one sentence. Readers aren’t as smart as you’d think.

Learn how brains organize ideas. Readers comprehend “the boy hit the ball” quicker than “the ball was hit by the boy.” Both sentences mean the same, but it’s easier to imagine the object (the boy) before the action (the hitting). All brains work that way. (Notice I didn’t say, “That is the way all brains work”?)

That’s it. You just learned 80% of the rules of good writing. You’re welcome.
sai 发表于 4/9/2016 6:58:19 PM [url=http://forums.huaren.us/showtopic.aspx?topicid=1222855&postid=71356012#71356012]

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<p><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 13px="13px" /21px Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; WHITE-SPACE: pre-wrap; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(17,17,17); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px">当一个男人同时对两个女孩子有好感时,他更爱谁取决于谁更不爱他。——韩寒 这是传说中的犯贱心理学么</span></p>
<p><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 13px="13px" /21px Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; WHITE-SPACE: pre-wrap; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(17,17,17); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"></span> </p>
<p><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 13px="13px" /21px Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; WHITE-SPACE: pre-wrap; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(17,17,17); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px">男人不能原谅女人身体出轨,女人不能原谅男人精神出轨。男人更注重对女人身体的独占欲,女人更看重对男人心灵的占有。女人可以接受有故事</span><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px">的男人,<font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffff00">男人普遍不爱有故事的女人。</font></span></span></p>
<p><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 13px="13px" /21px Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; WHITE-SPACE: pre-wrap; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(17,17,17); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffff00"></font></span></span> </p>
<p><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 13px="13px" /21px Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; WHITE-SPACE: pre-wrap; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(17,17,17); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px">从现在开始,聪明一点,不要问别人想不想你,爱不爱你?若是要想你或者爱你自然会对你说,但是从你的嘴里说出来,别人会很骄傲和不在乎你。不要过份在意一些人,过份在乎一些事,顺其自然,以最佳的心态面对,这个世界就是这样:往往在最在乎的事物面前,我们最没有价值。</span></span></span></p>
<p><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 13px="13px" /21px Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; WHITE-SPACE: pre-wrap; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(17,17,17); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"></span></span></span> </p>
<p><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 13px="13px" /21px Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; WHITE-SPACE: pre-wrap; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(17,17,17); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px">遇到你真正爱的人时:要努力争取和他相伴一生的机会。因为当他离去时,一切都来不及了;遇到可相信的朋友时:要好好和他相处下去。因为在人的一生中,可遇到知己真的不易;遇到曾经爱过的人时:记得微笑向他感激,因为他是曾经让你更懂爱的人。</span>--- i can relate to the say with every fiber of my being</span></span></span></p>
<p><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 13px="13px" /21px Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; WHITE-SPACE: pre-wrap; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(17,17,17); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"></span></span></span> </p>
<p><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 13px="13px" /21px Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; WHITE-SPACE: pre-wrap; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(17,17,17); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><span style="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(255,255,255); TEXT-INDENT: 0px; LETTER-SPACING: normal; DISPLAY: inline="inline" !important; FONT: 14px="14px" /28px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; FLOAT: none; COLOR: rgb(51,51,51); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px">跟异性来往最重要的不是他有多好,而是他对你有多好。</span></span></span></span></p>
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