A few more grammar problems - just my opinion

"One night" NOT "A night",
"at roadside" NOT "at aside of road",
"his steps" NOT "his step",
"on the back side of her head" NOT "her back side of head"
"rose" NOT "rised"
"shivered" NOT "gave a shiver"
"another back side of head with a braid on it" THIS IS CONFUSING, do you mean "the other backside of her head with a braid on it"?